雅思写作真经

为什么不会被判模板？因为它规定的不是句型，而是思想推进的顺序：亮观点 → 讲道理 → 举例子 → 让一步 → 收尾。用中文说出来也成立，考官看到的是一篇有逻辑的文章。

四段式变体：练熟五段后可以把二三段合成一段，或把让步并进结论段——骨架还是这 15 件事。

考官范文平均 12 句：2 句简单句、2 句并列句、8 句各种从句。我们的 15 句作文里，写出 4 种不同的从句就够 GRA 上 7。

• 宾语从句：Many people believe that we have developed into a throw-away society.
• 状语从句（条件/让步）：If a student wants job-specific information, they do not need to sit in a classroom. / While traditional buildings look nice, they are often not user-friendly.
• 定语从句（人 who / 物 that, which）：Those who feel that sports stars' salaries are justified might argue that… / Governments should launch a traffic control system, which can monitor and facilitate traffic flows.
• 主语从句：Whether mobile phones bring more harm than good has caused heated debate. / What most companies need is not robots, but creative people.
• 表语从句：This is because it is the rich and powerful who are able to impose changes. / This means that change is not always a personal option.
• 同位语从句：I agree with the view that not only governments but every citizen should do their part.

三条铁律：逗号不能连接两个完整句子（要连词或分号）；从句一律用陈述语序；not only…but also… 前后成分要对等。

五大忌：没有数字极值、没有趋势对比、没有从句、没有结论、议论因果（小作文只描述，不解释为什么）。

四段结构：① 改写题目（一句）② 总体趋势 overview（一两句，不带具体数字）③ 细节段一 ④ 细节段二。

四大趋势：上升 rise / increase / grow；下降 fall / decline / drop；波动 fluctuate；平稳 remain stable / level off。

程度修饰：dramatically / sharply / significantly（大）；gradually / steadily（稳）；slightly / marginally（小）。

倍数与分数：doubled / tripled / halved；two thirds of…；account for 40% of…；A is three times as high as B。

首句动词：show / illustrate / compare / give information about（别用 tell、say）。

同义替换：number→figure；percentage→proportion；category→type/group；trend→tendency。

亮观点：My view is that… / I agree with the view that…, for the following reasons. / I mainly agree with the former/latter view.

中心句：Firstly, it is obvious that… / Moreover, … can benefit … / One reason for this is that…

展开：This is because… / This means that… / If … does not …, … will …

举例：For example, … / A case in point is … / Take … as an example.

让步：That is not to say that … should not … / It is also true that … / Those who harbour the view that … believe that …

结论：In summary, … / Meanwhile, we should not overlook … / Only by doing so can we …（only 在句首要倒装）

换词：important→crucial/vital；problem→dilemma；damage→undermine；many→a considerable number of；think→believe/hold the view。